Thread:Claws Bane/@comment-4990756-20120713174059

Hi, I have done the Cloak of Darkness page, but for 'Brief Synopsis' my overall plot seems to be a bit long.....can you read it over or kust look at it and say if it is too long? I will try and chop it down a bit. Thanks! May the Force and odds be with you in your favour! T.a14 (talk) 